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William  Marsh's avatar

All the lines are 6 or 7 stresses except the last, which straight pentameter. The contrast gives it a directness and spontaneity and makes it a strong ending. Thanks for this.

Claire Adderholt's avatar

Fantastic - it’s hard not to slide into sentimentality on one side or despair on the other when writing about suffering, but this has a clear sharp clarity. And gives voice to doubts I struggle with

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