Caelyn, I love this! My favourite thing is a good synthesis of Scripture, and you’ve picked up so many good images and woven them together with such skill into one coherent piece. Well done, and please do more!
the octet is about God's judgment - the violent water of the sea. The sextet is about God's love. Justice prepares the way for God's love but God's love protects from - or transcends justice. A shifting perspective. Thank you for this.
Caelyn, I love this! My favourite thing is a good synthesis of Scripture, and you’ve picked up so many good images and woven them together with such skill into one coherent piece. Well done, and please do more!
Thank you so much, Kilby!
Excellent! Lyrical and rolling, which matches the subject of the poem so well.
the octet is about God's judgment - the violent water of the sea. The sextet is about God's love. Justice prepares the way for God's love but God's love protects from - or transcends justice. A shifting perspective. Thank you for this.